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What is time?
Time is what brings about the tranquil whisper of a serene zephyr as it wafts through my ears.
Time is what keeps the thunderous applause of leaves rustling in the wind very much alive.

What is time?
Time is what causes the icy cold water of a sinuous river to make me tremble.
Time is what permits the grass to tickle my feet as I dash through an open meadow.

During times of hardship and frustration, we wish time would come to a STOP.
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Then we remember how beautiful the world really is, and we learn to appreciate time once again.

What is time?
Time is what allows us to scrutinize the world’s true splendor, as zephyrs waft through our ears, leaves rustle in the wind, icy cold water makes us shiver, and grass tickles our feet.
Admit it. We all love being lost in time.
©2009-2010 ~TheQuartzkid
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Author's Comments

Lately, I've been taking a lot of interest in sensory detail. It really does fascinate me. It isn't much, but I did indeed use some sensory detail in this deviation. The main point I'm trying to get across here is how time can be the main indredient for the true gorgeousness of nature and Earth's true beauty, and how we, as humans, sometimes forget to appreciate what a beautiful world we live in.

This is for a title contest with the obvious title of, "Lost In Time"... The contest is indeed being held by =writingclub
If I'm not utterly mistaken, it's their first contest. Correct me if I'm wrong! :)

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:iconemiko-chan-xd:
I thought about this idea for a while, but you did it much better than I could have. Great job, and good luck!

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:relaxed: Because I want to

Angels & Airwaves FTW! :headbang:

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Pimping clubs...

Das writing~! =writingclub

:heart: Elric~! ~Team-Edward-Elric

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"Each breath that you take has a thunderous sound
Everything, everything's magic"
:iconthequartzkid:
Yay! I'm not the only freak who would associate the title, "Lost In Time" with nature and shtuff! :boogie:

lol, Thanks for the comment... I check my DeviantArt inbox almost daily, and I always smile at the number of messages I've received, only to be let down upon discovering that most, if not all of them, are junk mail... (Newsletters and ads... Not AIDS, ads...) I really was happy when I saw that someone had left a comment on this... Thanks again! :glomp:

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I'd say he's about one Fruit Loop shy of a full box!
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"My name is Ganondorf." - Ganondorf
:iconemiko-chan-xd:
Your welcome! And I know the feeling ;)

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:relaxed: Because I want to

Angels & Airwaves FTW! :headbang:

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Pimping clubs...

Das writing~! =writingclub

:heart: Elric~! ~Team-Edward-Elric

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"Each breath that you take has a thunderous sound
Everything, everything's magic"
:iconfangirl-of-ace:
Amazing.

That is probably all I can say.

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"Words of insult take the same effort as words of praise -- only morals decide which shall be spoken."

"I never work. But mysteriously, I always get everything done."
-Me

"I wanted a blanket. Instead, there is a cat. I do not know why this is."
-My mom
:iconthequartzkid:
Thank you! I'm surprised someone actually liked it! Truth be told, I don't really "adore" most of what I write... I don't absolutely hate any of it, I just don't like some things... But, again, thanks for the comment! It means so much!

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I'd say he's about one Fruit Loop shy of a full box!
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"My name is Ganondorf." - Ganondorf
:iconfangirl-of-ace:
Well, it's very good! It's really rather detailed, which I can never seem to get. I just feel the need to respect someone who can do something I cannot, so that is what I do. Thank you for writing it.

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"Words of insult take the same effort as words of praise -- only morals decide which shall be spoken."

"I never work. But mysteriously, I always get everything done."
-Me

"I wanted a blanket. Instead, there is a cat. I do not know why this is."
-My mom

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